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Hm, I dunno if I should wait till I submit the stuff to the site, but a bit of critcism before couldn't hurt, I guess, it's not a battle or anything.

Here's page 1, just finished it. I'll probably start the pencils for page 2 today yet.

I think this ambient is the most tough I've attempted so far, a rainy early morning. I think I need to try exploring better the mix between paintings and cellshading, since with the cell alone, it didnt get obvious about the wet part. (read ground)

Keep moving forward!

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Wooot!
AWESOMNESS as usual.

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LOVE that opening shot, its stinkin' cool and I'm actually a huge fan or your shading, it has a great original feel to it. Like another world or something/ Maybe for the water, adding some lighter colored rippling would help? It looks actually like ice with gradient on it which is also cool.
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Thanks! and i think you totally killed the charade! I think ripples would solve it completely. maybe blue ripples in orange areas and vice and versa?
:iconstrayheadache:
YEA YEEES most def, that would look tight!
:icondonteatthefish:
Man this is exciting, I can't wait til he gets in T-T
I'm not really seeing the wet, early morning though. I would think the sky would be grayer if it was rainy. Baby blue sky gives a feeling of sunny afternoon-ish. I noticed some spelling mistakes, dunno if you caught em already, but: panel two, I think you meant "...a strange occurrence". last panel, a missing H in "thickens".
I love the colors though, not sure they set the tone you wanted but I'm not really suggesting you change em.
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Yay, Thanks! I hope I don't take much time, the filling blacks pen is running out very soon X:
Hm, I tried googling a reference when i coloured this, but now that you mention, the one I used was probably wrong haha! And thanks for the headsup on the speech, I'll fix them aswell!!
Thank you sir!
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Pleasure, Everything you do is awesome... I'm being depressed... :D

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